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The North Wind by ~bl148:iconbl148:



The wintry Northern Wind,
She blows and blows and blows.
O, you frosty maiden,
Why blow you ceaselessly?

Your hands my clothing mess,
Your nails they scratch my skin;
With pale face you look me
Which racks with chills my breast.

Away all human warmth,
Away all tender care;
O mistress why do you
Your loveless magic wield?

I know not whence I came,
Nor whither I shall go;
So blow on, you North Wind,
And lead me to my end.
©2005-2009 ~bl148
:iconbl148:

Author's Comments

Words to a medieval madrigal, or something more?

Which is the subject, and which the metaphor?

(I wanted to change it, but fortunately for sound advice from E, I didn't. Many thanks!)

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:iconcrysa:
Your really good at poetry too! Wish I was good at photography and writing. Very nice :D

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:boogie:
:iconbl148:
How very sweet of you to say that. Thank you.

:hug:
:iconteengkoh:
Could one sing this?
It doesn't rhyme, though, and the only person I have ever heard who can sing lines which do not rhyme is Alanis Morrissette.

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Emo is the new cool.
:iconbl148:
Well, I had the *idea* of a madrigal in mind, but no, I don't think that this is singable. ^_^
:iconstrawberrycheeks:
This poem is simply great! It reminds me Romantic poetry, and you used images that suggest me a designed version of this :)
:fav:

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Hold me
Like you held onto life
When all fears came alive and entombed me
Love me
Like you loved the sun
Scorching the blood from my Vampire Heart


.:Your love will be the death of me:.
:iconbl148:
You don't know how happy that comment made me. *grins widely* Thank you so much, Chiara.

You even picked the Romantic (in the philosophical back-to-nature sense, doubtless) influence! You're awesome. :hug:
:iconstrawberrycheeks:
Always happy to make someone else happy as well ;) :hug:
Yeah your poem really has a Romantic taste :)

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Hold me
Like you held onto life
When all fears came alive and entombed me
Love me
Like you loved the sun
Scorching the blood from my Vampire Heart


.:Your love will be the death of me:.

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